Black Poetry : One Day...

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  1. lilcutie

    lilcutie Active Member MEMBER

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    one day i thought i could fly
    that i could spread my wings and soar
    leave behind my troubles
    yeah, i wish i could fly
    and just say f**k my sorrows
    fly

    one day i thought i was a murderer
    that i killed the man i loved
    because he hurt me
    and slept with my sister...
    my cousin.....
    and my best friend
    yeah i wish i could kill the muthaf**ka
    it would feel so good

    one day i thought i was free
    that i had no worries or woes
    yeah death was the best
    but i was pulled back too soon
    i wish i could go back
    it was so peaceful
    death

    that was one crazy a** day
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    often the mind wonder into a place very under
    where we vision in maze things that take place
    in our slumber we dream the unknown
    and by day it's like some song and we call it
    ONE DAY !

    I feel you i've had crazy dayz too...................
     
  3. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    w00t! Vivid imagery.

    That write actually had me smilin' a little. Thanks for bringin it, lilcutie.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked the way you poetically put these thoughts of, what if? Much enjoyed.
     
  5. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't kill him gurl:slingshot
    Nice piece