Black Poetry : one day

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Sep 28, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One Day
    I’m here
    One day I’m gone
    Spiting this meat too long
    My beat too long
    Time to move on
    Bolts on
    Tightening with my tool on

    Metaphors gone
    Strayed away
    Fade away
    Lost status the hard a way
    Scraping pennies the hard a way
    Tearing mental physical scabs that way
    Tugging my shoulder, flying my membrane nat a way
    Ol gangsta like, putting my gat away

    This isn’t death, the last of me
    For I’ve been shot, the blast of me
    My body resets, restarts the dastardly
    A broken clark alarms half-hazardly
    A bachelor studying trying to master the
    Moved on from the screen masking me
    Fonts on, designed lines, connections passing me
    At the podium, frenzy of correspondents asking me

    One day, smiles bring tears
    Tears bring joy




    p.s. it's league time
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow. Keep scribing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya pen on fire let it burn flow on !!!
    tyte
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice...i loved the way it just flowed together...much love