Black Poetry : One day I hope......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, Aug 15, 2006.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One day I hope our pens will write
    I hope that our pens will fight

    to be as one
    So lovely to have the sun

    upon us
    No worries, or no fuss

    Do you remember when I first came on the scene
    Jus tried to Lean

    wit it, rock wit it
    and you was feeling my ish

    Me and you go back, back, forth and forth
    We didnt keep it simple, sweet and short

    We just gave it all we had
    We didnt die out like some fad (ahhhh shucks snap ya fingers do ya dance/you can do it all by yourself/ let me see ya do it aaaaaaaa courtesy of lil Jon)

    You kept me working as I worked you
    Never leaving or scratching my head on what next to do
    I stayed wit you (i wanna rock with you all nyte-Mj rock with you)

    When no other could come up with nothing else
    Could you at least for the moment feel what i felt
    You just made my heart melt

    I know I'm young and still have alot to learn
    But teach me daddy I so want to yearn

    What it is that's a mystery about my King
    I sometimes think about if you could give me a ring

    To say, "Hey Peach how's it going."
    Never once showing

    That you couldn't care
    I like how we dared

    Each other
    Enticed one anotha

    Till I almost gave into you
    I felt like you was my Poetic Boo!!!!!

    But one thing I will wait on
    And to hopefully our friendship, our pens will gro strong
    And if were to be alone

    May we. our pens come together to form a rhyme noone has ever formed
    And to us I hope we'll be reborn

    As

    One day I hope...........

    To my Appreciated friend thanks!!!!!!!!
    :kiss2:
     
  2. sheikdadon

    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one day i hope...
    i hope that our pens can insite riots
    cause sweet poetic rawkus never quiet
    i am ya dearly appreciated friend
    as long as theres ink we'll never end
    we can express da power of literacy
    some are ignorant but not u n me
    we manuver fluently thru trial n error
    we'll die but da words a live on forever
    i got hella punch lines oh so clever
    i got a mind dat my physical time
    ****? i know can never define
    i be droppin swift lyrical mockeries
    nobody gone prolong or commence to stop me
    like creative junkies submerged in dis
    i so desperately crave da next hit
    we humiliate separate da fake from da serious
    our pens sex a make da avg ***** delirious...
     
  3. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful write and i loved the song references! Keep flowin'
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow sheik you sure are spitting some fire. thanks for the flow back


    napturally yours thanks for the love shown.
     
  5. sheikdadon

    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    always ma thanx 4 lettn me i dig ya style short
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nevar:
    Sista this was a really nice write. Keep it flowing poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow......u know i could blow in this
    but i'll be kind and reside in it awesome scribe
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    man

    i felt love and respect here

    and hopefully when you do team with this writer i get to read the finished product

    very nice
    very nice

    poet
     
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