Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nisa, Feb 10, 2005.
And with the faith of "One" mustard seed, will take you through all the pain you endure. I shared your grief as well, while reading it. This is an awesome piece. Thanks for allowing me to share you and your's pain.
dang...this piece has me feelin blue...heartfelt scribe sis...
may u and your family be blessed with healing....
this poem really dug me deep into my soul. i really felt the sadness of this poem. Keep the flow goin
heavy flow one that carry me deep in memory !
I don't know you, but i know how it feels to be moved.
This piece was, from beginning to end, right and exact in every way.
Some people can be so savage-like that they don't understand the lives they destroy just by hurting one person.
This was on point.
This was so heart felt. The flow was smooth and the words deep. I read it three times and felt it more everytimetill am shivering from the coldness of thee bullet that destroyed so much.
WOW.........................felt this one to the bone all the way thru! this scribe was "One bullet" - shot from the scribess to the heart of this reader.
This piece really touched me. Thank you for sharing this.
Quite touching, a well written piece. Only one life may be literally over, but it takes a fraction of others lives in so many ways. Flow on poet.
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