Black Poetry : One Bullet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nisa, Feb 10, 2005.

  1. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deleted....
     
  2. queentswana

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    And with the faith of "One" mustard seed, will take you through all the pain you endure. I shared your grief as well, while reading it. This is an awesome piece. Thanks for allowing me to share you and your's pain.
     
  3. Khasm13

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    dang...this piece has me feelin blue...heartfelt scribe sis...
    may u and your family be blessed with healing....
    one love
    khasm
     
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    this poem really dug me deep into my soul. i really felt the sadness of this poem. Keep the flow goin
     
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    heavy flow one that carry me deep in memory !
     
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    Nisa.

    I don't know you, but i know how it feels to be moved.

    This piece was, from beginning to end, right and exact in every way.

    Some people can be so savage-like that they don't understand the lives they destroy just by hurting one person.

    Peace Nisa.

    This was on point.
     
  7. Randee

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    This was so heart felt. The flow was smooth and the words deep. I read it three times and felt it more everytimetill am shivering from the coldness of thee bullet that destroyed so much.
     
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    peace,

    WOW.........................felt this one to the bone all the way thru! this scribe was "One bullet" - shot from the scribess to the heart of this reader.

    peace..........
     
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    This piece really touched me. Thank you for sharing this.
     
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    Quite touching, a well written piece. Only one life may be literally over, but it takes a fraction of others lives in so many ways. Flow on poet.
     
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