Black Poetry : Once you.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Nov 5, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have survived the storm
    Came up from the rain..
    Livin in a world of weak and strong
    Mighty hills I do climb..But…
    I have survived the rain of da storm
    As it pulled me down each time…
    And I rose stronger with every pull..
    See many know many will never know
    Its moves the moon and starz…
    Makes your day better in every way…
    And you trust in the love..
    From above..cause it will show
    You the way…wrap you and guide you
    In A garden of music a garden of love..
    The garden of faith..the air you
    Breath gets better..
    Takes you in new direction…
    Makes you feel like heaven…
    To fly free…It
    Opens you up to a brand new
    world..and feeling better inside
    and out when you reach it...
    The sun shines brighter…
    The moon on high..and the starz twinkle
    more in sight…
    I have survived the storm…
    Nothing can be greater…..
    Once you survive the storm…
    all will never find this place...
    most will...and is a peace
    you can never leave..
    once you
    find it...

    A blkangel thang... :rolling:
     
  2. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tha truff......indeed.......all of us had had some rainy dayz.....but tha point is to get back up twice as strong........you brought some strong vibez with this one.....lovin' it.........and want to read more of it......nice flow sis.....
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TRIUMPH...Nice skrybe ....
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for da read fam...means alot :grouphug:
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this really shines, girl. so pretty
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside deep down we hold the inner power
    this speak truth openly and we all fall under
    the rain but strong will allow us to stand up
    on the dry bridge ......faith is the key.....continue
     
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    very nice flow
    you compose
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis $$RICH$$ Bluewater

    thank you for readin my post..
    love yall...for the support and love you show..:angel1:
     
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