Quiet Poetry Lounge : Once was

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Dec 19, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once was safe
    Not anymore
    For it came in like
    The wind
    Thinkin and knowin
    But wasn’t sure…..
    So what do u do…
    Defend it or just take it
    As it comes…..
    Ramblin my thoughts
    Not sure
    Whats happenin
    In beteewn the fire…
    is where I stand…
    No longer breathin….
    As I look around….
    theres nothing really there….
    Once was safe….but not anymore
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya so right sistah indeed i hear ya on dis one
    speak on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emotional piece...try to slow the mind...peace
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice..

    " Once was safe
    Not anymore "

    Open up to the good ride this quiet storm brings.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for the love and support my brother...much love to you...... :angel1:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname actually not that emotional just felt a flow inside me...
    so i went wit it..thanz for da read.... :angel1:

    HODEE- indeed...much love to ya...
    glad ya like my poem.... :angel1:
     
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