Black Poetry : ONCE UPON A TIME

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  1. MRS. LADY

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    Once upon a time
    spoken words of poetry

    God said let it
    And for sure it just be

    He heard a voice
    That said nothing

    When voice was a feeling
    An nothing made something

    He could feel her love of the sky
    So the sunlight shown the blue of her eyez

    He could feel her love of the land
    So her eyez changed green from the sunlight of her man

    And from the mc squared the motion was round
    He made her hair curl from the top all the way down

    Her blue/green eyez gazed passionately over the sand
    So he made her skin brown for she loved the land

    Now all that she needed was hands to reach for him
    But somewhere in between something made up sin

    So she walked on her hands although she had feet
    She was unsidedown above herself with a fate to hurry up and meet

    So she walked and walked and walked for Time she knew not
    all that she knew was the beat of her heart

    So her heart beat and beat and beat for nothing else
    Then to merely complete her journey and arrive at herself
     
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    for this has just walked me through a compromising soul of a great creation
    once upon a tyme i thought i saw her but i knew i was dreammin or just lost
    in the moment or did i see her ........I love this flow Miss Lady
     
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    Miss Lady, I wanted to respond to this one, but I'm gonna need a little help.

    I'm not getting it.

    I mean, you're the "she" who's the "best MC!"

    But this one had me scratching my head.

    Help a sistah out.
     
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    Egyptian Hieroglyphics

    best she mc true

    but sometimes I'm just a lover of art and creation

    http://z.about.com/d/ancienthistory/1/0/e/X/2/shu.jpg


    ^^^^^^^^ EGYPTIAN ART
     
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    this was

    a great piece

    i felt this

    especially the last line

    especially

    :terrific:
     
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