Black Poetry : once upon a time....

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  1. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ... i would have died for this
    you were bliss
    from the touch of your hand
    to the euphoria of a kiss
    i used to love you
    move one finger and i jump
    couldn't give it up
    couldn't get enough
    overdosing on chocolate sweet
    from your curly black fro
    to the soles of your feet
    bon apetite
    eat drink sleep you forever
    like al green said
    wether or never
    good bad....

    once upon a time...

    ... i didnt need my house
    my car my clothes
    surrendered in your extacy
    willful blindness arose
    i needed no friends no family
    no life not a thing
    just you and me eternally
    were more than all those things
    late night physical conversations
    instant inebriation
    sinfull blessings
    elation
    we were THE creation
    **** i burned inside and out
    it was all about...
    about...
    didn't matter.
    it was as perfect as it had to be
    afrodesiac me
    faithfully
    committed
    unrequitted
    complete
    relief
    joy
    pain
    every emotional thang
    it was the ultimate climax...

    and i'm still in withdrawal.
    are you ever coming back??

    --peacebeme MsDy
    (copywrite protected 2004/ arr to alw.)
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HOT THREAD
    sis this drop was sweet,but there's so much longing
    :wink:Loved it:wave:
     
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    very well posed
    likes this
    tight
    .....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooooweeeeeeeeee!
    are u coming back is the question !
    tyte drop indeed
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, something as glorious as this, I guess you would be wondering if he is coming back. This piece was very inviting.
     
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