Black Poetry : once upon a time...

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    once upon a time it was you and me...
    l use to call you brown sugar in '95
    [/I]yeah, that D'Angelo was live[/I]
    you were the bomb then..
    yo you had to be b/c l never wanted to "hit it"
    we were 18 when college seperated us... lt was straight
    until l made a surprise visit to Howard with your favorite candy and flowers and saw you in a whip when some guy
    as we looked in each other's eye... :jawdrop:
    why oh why
    silly me.
    finding how love must really be
    oh well l gave it a try and drove to my boy's crib...
    "dun, you thought she was your rib, your world,
    l told you she was like the other girls!!!"
    heard she was looking for me, paging me
    ###-####-911!!
    "should l answer?"
    "yeah man why not?"
    she met me at a friend's. she began to cry
    l had no reply except thinking l'm about to touch her "spot"..
    after all, why not?
    "so you didn't cheat"
    "no", she said strong...
    l wiped her tears and spoke in her hears "don't cry."
    l just fell out of love with her headlong..
    l said l wouldn't "hit it" but l was dead wrong...
     
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    J'hiah, captivating story my man, keep 'em coming-
     
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    yesssssssssssss! j'hiah tyteeeeeeee scribe i see all in this one
     
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    wow! i'm lovin' this!!
     
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