Black Poetry : Once,Twice,Three Times

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Jul 13, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My momma always told me
    If you don't get it right the first time
    Try harder again
    Do the best you can every time
    And then try some more again

    So I did exactly
    What she told me
    And seems endlessly going around

    Infinite she never told me
    Would make itself known

    Never knew your gentle spirit
    Unit you told me yesterday

    Never knew that you still had feelings for me
    Until you you asked me
    If I felt the same

    I tried so hard
    To look for you
    And I couldn't find you

    Until I did
    I promise to try not to keep anything from you
    Or stay away for as long as I did

    You said you love me
    I'll never forget
    You said in a way
    That you needed me

    That you couldn't forget
    The past and you are now my present tense
    My future, like in a story

    I write to you
    Of love once again
    And I journey through
    What I thought was a sin
    To know you
    Is to know love
    Once,Twice,and Three times again

    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    Desert Storm
    you i would never wrong
    thank your mom and dad you was born
    sing you a song

    i don't know
    where do i go from here
    i don't care
    i just wanted to show i was up in here

    checking your flow
    and feeling the vibe
    you live
    west coast Westsideeee!

    So'ja
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stormi....


    once, twice, three times!!! it's dope!!

    i love the title to death!!... & the flow
    lets me know... fa sho that i been missin'
    my lil sis!! :) its good to see ya!

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1nce, 2wice, 3hree...tymes tyght! gurl, i'm lovin' this piece, desert stormin'. i'm still watchin' you, gurl. keep on scribin'.
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely fam

    Lovely fam
    We've got mo thugs
    And honey trickling down this mug

    We've got infinite
    And rythmes to chime in da beats

    We've got consistant flow
    Always and forever and another day

    We've got everlasting
    Materials

    Like the greates hits
    We get so emotional
    Till it's like a flow

    And recooperating
    From this magical rain,sunshine,thunderstorm

    We're above the norm

    Lovely fam

    WE got talent
    Pouring out the pages

    Quenching the thirst of love
    And struggles,pride,and self acceptance,religion,race,ethnicity
    Diversity,skin color,sexuality,passionate fruits

    Blossoms bloom
    From our seed of youth

    And we live life to the fullest
    And breathe fresh air
    We new that we could do it

    And do it
    So we did

    So to all my lovely fam
    Feel me now
    Destee fam
    Keepin hope alive
    Just like you know how

    Enough to set one's heart a flame
    Burning out of sincerity
    And lingering just the same

    Expressions of equality
    So much quality
    So much time and effort
    Was put
    Taking care
    WE are so proud
    And proud we should!
    Be to be ourselves
    And the Destee/Afro family!

    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done poetess

    u gave me something to live by.......thanx
    des was a fat 10:D
     
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