Black Poetry : Once in a Heart..

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A heart is full of emotions that flow within
    deep like the raising of the ocean waves
    bright as the sun rays…and gleams just like
    a star circling the moon…..
    Some take for granted some hold the treasure
    Far across the space overwhelming in time

    Every night in my dreams
    my heart forever ponder
    I see the light that surround us
    In heavenly bliss our souls connected…
    Near then before
    Far as near can get
    I know your there
    I was scared..
    And you took my fear
    But the tears and pain are once more
    For my heart searches
    who will complete me
    And he found me and open the door
    But ashamed to bring our love alive
    Like a new born lily that turns into a rose
    In the morning sun..with cascading falls
    Of a wonderland…pieces drown
    And my heart will but can't go on…
    No clue of what it shall be
    Which way to turn
    Because for me it was true time
    No matter the miles the space
    I believed in you…
    Something that will last a lifetime
    Like a dream long ago
    He opened the door
    To my heart to close it once more
    And I forever hear him say
    I love you
    As tears run cold and dark
    The night can never hold
    As love leaves once more
    Leaves me to search again…
    But his love forever holds


    Once a heart is broken the pieces never
    Fit the same...

    (C) 2004..blackangel poetry
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so tru .............very nicely pose'd
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Rich....once love touches a heart that is true and breaks it
    its hard to find all them pieces and make them fit right once more indeed...thank you again for the love on dis

    Angel
     
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    This is so beautiful Sis!
    all so heart touching! :heart::crying:
    Sounds like my theme song!

    Beautiful write!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when i wrote this i wanted the reader to feel it
    thank you for letting me know it touch you as it did
    love ya sis!!!!! happy you enjoyed it..:grouphug:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    Yes...very heartfelt...emotional. I can feel the sadness in this peace; the sadness of a broken heart.

    :thanks: for sharing with us your pain, your disbelief, your sadness of a broken heart.

    :toast:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so beautiful, sweetie. Makes me want more.
     
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    :angel1: Thanks 4 the lovely and emotional drop my sister. Love your poetic skills Angle. :huh:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks money gempis and CP for da love
    happy you all likes it

    peace
    angel
     
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    "Like a dream long ago
    He opened the door
    To my heart to close it once more
    And I forever hear him say
    I love you
    As tears run cold and dark
    The night can never hold
    As love leaves once more
    Leaves me to search again…
    But his love forever holds"

    Wow, Angel, did you really experience this??? Whew! Takes a strong individual to share this kind of deep internal stuff... I guess it would be therapeutic, but...its so heavy... Scared a you, sista!(smile!)

    Peace!
    Isaiah
     
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