Black Haiku : Once Again.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by abstract219, May 24, 2006.

  1. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Silence at dinner,
    She pokes the baked fish, guess I'm
    Sleeping on the couch.
     
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    Stilliness unspoken
    cool breeze filled the silent room
    now untouchable
     
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    LMAO....your response was funnier than the original....
     
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