Black Poetry : Once Again...

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again...
    Being awakened by your love
    shaking me gently like
    a whisper from God up above
    your spirit moves me
    to unfamiliar places and spaces
    within my psyche, yet I feel
    at home, at ease, while traces
    of your feathery touch leave
    eternal imprints on my soul
    I smile at the joy and wonder
    of it all, as I ponder about the whole
    of these countless blessings
    of God's love, of what God can
    truly do. Allowing him in, he can create
    wonders beyond the scope of man
    Such a rhapsody
    of you
    of me
    So lovely to be awakened by your love
    Once again....
     
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    Sister...this was beautiful
    it encompassed an inner serenity
    that superceded the words
    reaching beyond the flow
    and touching the soul...

    *Applause*....

    I needed this...
    Sage
     
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    When eternal imprints are left on one's soul ...surely you have been "touched"
    and what a wonderful way to wake up to love.
    This piece had such a beautiful touch of 'gentleness to it...thanks for touching me.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sage, I wanted this to be a peaceful piece, thank you for letting me know that it was, and that it brought you some ease my sista. Thank you.
    And thank you Queent for letting me know you felt a gentleness in this scribe. Appreciated.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a very warm splash of heart awakening fill wit love
    nice drop
     
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    The 'eternal imprints left on my soul' line got me, too, and like Sage, I needed this one. What an inspiration you've painted, sis, cause I have trouble believing in it anymore. Thank you. Much love.
     
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    Happy to know that you felt the warmth in this vibe Rich. Merry Christmas!!
    I'm glad this was inspirational for you gempis. When I write this way, I'm trying to inspire myself as well. Thanks sis, and Merry Christmas!!
     
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    Once again
    I see how much your heart is full
    Full of love and hope
    I just look into your eyes and i see a bright future ahead
    The future of a woman who knows how to hear her heart
    How to translate every beats of ur heart
    I guess u have ur heart in ur hands
    U surely are generous,kind and smart
    I wih this Christmas will be overflowed with love and happiness for you
    Be blessed
    Lloyd
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again, I read a poet with such beauty in his flow, this has touched me more than you know...Thank you for the lovely response in verse Lloyd. Happy holidays to you and yours brotha.
     
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