Black Poetry : On Your Mark, Get Set, Die! (A Message to The Gun Toting *******)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Disclaimer: Hey peeps i'm not really into dropping "N" bombs, but, every now and then I feel I have to for emphasis. So excuse me while I emphasize.

    I know that the gun is a
    Phallic symbol
    and brothers don't give birth
    to guns/thus not being the fathers
    of these offsprings of destruction

    but, if ******* know this, if
    ******* know this, since *******
    KNOW this


    then why? why? why? are they so quick
    to engage in a sprint/to grab another
    man's dyck/stroke it/
    then come all over another brother because
    of bullshyt?

    (as if they can put on a kevlar condom
    to keep from getting pregnant/and 9 seconds
    later give birth to the ends of their lives)


    ON YOUR MARK, GET SET, DIE...

    ******, your ejaculatory behavior's got yo'
    *** on the spot/cause that brother you
    popped/did not drop/now you're calling
    the cops...with that gun in hand you claimed
    you were a man/now you're scared like
    a *****/couldn't buy piece of mind if
    you were a million times rich...

    ARE YOU READY TO RUN?

    you better run fast/like 4 flat 40 yard time/
    check the rear view mirrors of your mind/
    and try to find/
    some place too hide
    loookin' for corners in a round world/
    yet your still searchin'
    fear has begun to choke all your hope
    because that ****** is out there
    (and he's comin')/
    and he's startin' to stroke
    (that's why you're runnin')
    his distorted symbol of manhood and
    his manhood is distorted
    (and he's lusting to come inside of YOU)
    you never thought you'd be the one to
    get "phucked"

    now you're stuck here in the top half
    of the hourglass after all the sand has run
    dry


    why? why? why?

    ...oops times up
    **** you didn't duck
    you got snuck
    and your cerebellum got struck
    by the gism of a horny ******
    seduced by the whispers of ignorance

    now you're face down
    your children's tears flood the ground
    and type O, AB,
    Negative
    Positive
    whatever you have runnin' through
    your veins/ is coating the
    the cement/
    and you have reached the end of
    this genocidal game
    the END of your race
    to the end of your life

    and now YOU
    who
    used to be the man on the block
    is spending his last seconds wondering

    Why
    why? why? why?...

    ...you stepped into the starting blocks
    of a race you had no business runnin'

    ON YOUR MARK, GET SET, DIE!

    (c)2000 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    This was a Seriously Tyte piece of REALIpoeTrY. You have madd skillz.....when you gonna hit an "open mic"?

    Let me know!! :D

    (oh, I seen a small insignificant typo....and I made the correction for you)

    :wink:

    N2
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Yo Black

    Yo Blak
    the sad fact
    the understanding is what we lack
    to busy running for a gat
    but programmed we are - by the way we act

    another brotha
    undercover
    crying mother
    six feet under

    while all inside the global
    struggle over nonsense

    DSSNY
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    verb

    depth and truth of reality dem guns ! DAYUMMMMM!!!!!!
    tyght **** here................................................................
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!

    Verb,


    You's a bad BlakMan!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    whoa!

    you said it!

    pd

    peace
     
  7. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm speechless!

    This is so true! This needs to be read in our public high schools!!!
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ - once again brother thanks for the excavation.

    To all that hit this joynt thanks. this is some serious stuff. it all needs to stop...cause it affects us all.

    much love fam
    blak
     
  9. dnommo

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    twin...did you get it out of ya system? i mean...do we need to call mom or sumptin' i mean you seem to be jes a leeeeetttle bit upset...

    tight scribe poet and you put it down as i know only you could...

    one.
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twin,

    I stay upset. Mentally not physically cause that stuff wil kill ya. Too many brothers don't understand what it is to be a man. Too many feel that it is the steel that they grip that puts hairs on their chest. That train of thought raises the hairs on my back, ya know. I pray that one day all this madness will be over...

    blak
     
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