Black Poetry : On Those Days When it Rains

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On those days when it rains
    I want to have you next to me
    Over me
    Under me
    In me
    On those days when it’s dark and damp outside
    I want to feel warm and safe inside
    On those days when it rains
    I want to feel your hand caressing my back
    Your fingers gliding along the crevice
    Your tongue In my ear
    Your breath on my neck
    Every time the lightning strikes
    I want to hear you moan my name
    As my hips ride all the way to glory
    Every time the thunder rolls
    I want to feel you grab my ***
    As you thrust deep and hard
    On those days when it rains
    I want to feel loved
    Wanted
    Cherished
    Weak in the knees
    Short of breath
    I want to inhale
    Your manly scent
    Hear your deep rich baritone calling out my name
    On those days when it rains
    I want the bed to knock
    The frame to rattle
    And my breasts to jiggle
    I want to dance to the sway back rhythms
    That we create
    On those days when it rains
    I want to feel your front to my back
    Your heart beating under my heart
    On those days when it rains
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful in it's meaning and in it's content...there is just something about rainy days that can affect you just like this....

    K
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stoppppppp itttttttttttt!

    It must be Universal...cause I have been like this for as long
    as I can remember! My ex-husband and I used to play hookie from work or take a long lunch on days like this! In fact it's
    Raining in KC today!!!!!!ooooooooooooooooh chilllllllllld!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!! showers in da chi
    i no longer fly ....
    why ?
    coz me & her love the games
    to play in da rain
    and wooooweeee!
    u better stop dis chile!!!!!!!!
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    those rainy days...i'm lovin' this piece. hot!!! keep on scribin', nat.


    ~~~myndblos~~~
     
  6. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey I want a man like that on a day like that.
    Nice piece gurl.
    *Emma*
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Erotically romantic
    I wish I could flow like that
    Very beautiful flow poet
     
  8. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha....hmmmmm you touched me with this one...bringing back some memories...Love the imagery you put out........looking up to see if there's any clouds in the sky...
     
  9. poeticdelight

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    OH SNAP!!!

    GIRL GIRL GIRL

    wu!

    pd
     
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