Black Poetry : On This Day

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  1. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On This Day

    On this day I will share with you my fibers and breath
    I will exchange with you all my passion
    My trust
    My pain

    My joy

    My soul will intertwine deeply into the warm sands of your universe
    No other smile
    Touch
    Or eye will take me from your everlasting
    Warmth, and gentle greatness

    On This Day I will commit my Finance
    My Romance

    My Honesty
    My Fidelity
    My Reality
    My Body
    My Soul

    Just You and Me
    On This Day I marry the love of my life
     
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    I like this here! Tight flow marion:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    indeed

    dis day been marked
    for da true love
    tyght scribe poet!!!
     
  4. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is for a relatives wedding next week..
    I thought it sound like a sweet love piece
     
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    ****......STOLE THE WERDS RIGHT OUTTA MY MOUTH.......!!!!LOL
    NAH KID, GOOD CHOICE OF WORDS....
    I'M SURE PEEPS AT THE WEDDING WOULD 'PRECIATE DAT ONE.....
    ---KEEP FLOWIN' DAWG,---ONE
     
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    Whoa!! I would have cried..
    NICE!!!
     
  7. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    misty,

    LURK,
    Isn't funny how sometimes we fight love--then others times we invite it.
    It takes that special someone to make lose our boxing gloves and love. Thats marriage material. That's the only one worth marrying( However, the current divorce rate is vicious) LOL
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dis was very sweet marion:) Keep up da good work.:)

    Much Luv,

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Marion

    hi-five on this and i hope they enjoy your flow as much as i just did.





    One
     
  10. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks UbZo & Aaliyahmonet

    This peom somehow makes me want to married. I'm calling this the official wedding poem..