Black Poetry : On this **** board I undertake responsibility

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Nov 5, 2004.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On this **** board I undertake responsibility
    But blunder fake and silly don’t like my agility
    You see I don’t get props just the wet slop of being ignored
    After I’ve poured my energetic heart into a poetic part soared
    In my mind but couldn’t find one reply WTF going on
    Am I flowing wrong thought I was growing strong
    Stress in speech can’t impress or reach folks live on beach
    Hopes but can’t float like boats drown in my quotes bleach
    My throat feel like a testy ***** talk to DESTEE AND RICH
    Got sense and wisdom but need a defense system to switch
    My status and apparatus to get replies make me itch
    Like crazy too
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    within da style
    a sunshine smile
    replies dimple beat
    self defeat peace
    treat some sleep
    cast of love give
    for da hug a rub
    da feeling snub
    sending off a tub
    ibut yet the game
    not ova uncover
    within ...............
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YEAH RICH NICE POEM FOR REAL YO

    TRY TO BE a TENDER G BUT CATS HINDER ME through splendor see// stuff like sudden hate balked my hopes now walk around doped up,// guess i failed an oportunity to prevail in a community// of blackness need practice for this
     
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