Black Poetry : On The Winning Team(my declaration of indepent love)

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  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :donttell: But I've got a secret to tell
    Lover if you truly want to live out your dream
    I suggest you get

    On the winning team

    I know you said you want a love that
    can give you hope
    If you get lost in a sea of turmoil
    Some love to pull you back with true loves rope
    all your desires I feel i can fulfill
    IF you would just join

    The winning team

    My love is so strong
    In your heart you know this is where
    you belong
    Just so long as you can be true
    to your soul
    I know I've chosen the

    Winning team

    Together the two of us
    there's nothing they can do with us
    We complete eachother
    You my king
    I your queen
    Nothing stoppping us or holding us back
    you and I we make a perfect

    Team

    Nothing else in this world that possess
    And no greater tthing than my love
    That I can stress
    But only time will tell if this love affair
    Is best

    But I givce my soul to you
    No matter what we go through
    I vow to give you all I can
    And this I swear to you


    Just give me your forever and I'll do
    the rest


    Love come soft
    Love come still
    Love comes suddenly and all my dreams are fulfilled
    And the problems that I had before just seem
    to fade away

    :hearts4: :hearts3: :hearts2: :hearts1: :ilu: :luv: :couple:
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :fairy: SO UMM.. MAYBE IM ON THE WRONG TEAM.. CAN I COME AND JOIN YOURS? :kiss2: GREAT DROP!
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you there's always an open spot on the team lol.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, we have to be true to ourselves first, then we can allow ourselves to be true to someone else. Such an earnest, positive feel to this flow poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true love afloat the team of winners is within self
    to spread to others i felt dis one deep what a team
    to share in and with allow me in ......
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True indeed I'm just lookin for someone to let true love go afloat with me.
    Thank you all for the positive feedback. I'm at a point in my life where I really do need that.
    :donttell: :wink: :donttell:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    savor all ya heart can take , it's a beautiful thing !
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That is true. It is a beautiful thing but only if I let it be that way thank you.
     
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