Black Poetry : On the Strip

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Amun-Ra, Mar 11, 2004.

  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    B.J. strips for a living
    her friends think it’s cool
    her parents are totally outraged
    but it pays tuition at the school
    BJ’s boyfriend is jealous
    of leering eyes and beery fun
    no assurance and immaturity
    helps jealousy blind the only one.
    BJ on the cold slab
    firm tissue beginning to rot
    eyes open to forever
    stalked dead in the parking lot
     
  2. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    wow,,,wow
    tight ..
    filled with imagery..
    real and ..wow
    i lliked it...
     
  3. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Danger Always About

    We forget from time to time there is danger when we aren't careful--Amun-Ra
     
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    This was deep.

    The silent cries of a soul cast out.

    Nice.
     
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    We Never Seem to Be Careful Enough

    Happen here in Dallas and I'm sure other places--we get too comfortable--and there are predators about--Amun-Ra
     
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    That was powerfully awakening!

    Stay focused,

    Ujima
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    aweeeeee man tyte flowing bruh where u been
    dis was awesome Ra.............
     
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    Well you just cut to directly to the chase. Life's choices do have consequences...tight drop.
     
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    tight drop
    deep flow
     
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    aw felt this on some BJ tip stripping all nice post so let me drop this here

    Oh glory to a mandatory story about a Harley deadbeat misled a heap
    Not a fictitious tale, hot but prevail, slop don’t sail well, this creep
    Call me home on my wall phone claiming he’s all alone and must weep
    Street cop taking my bike I’m mistaken and dislike it a Electra glide
    Seventy one chrome heavenly done, gone on a flatbed for an impound ride
    Be a bitter end for one I consider friend, I’m gonna be brave and strong
    Gave him a loan of twenty five hundred, plenty jive thundered wrong
    After that, he never paid back now I parade whack around town
    As a clown didn’t know he get down like that sound astound
    Me, his behavior after the favor was a major problem I’m crown
    As stupid, he’s a terrific devil at a specific level a crooked hound
    This kid should keep in mind the truth leak sometime and find you
    Time to correct this blind defect make this swindle dwindle shine through
     
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