Quiet Poetry Lounge : On The Eve of Wonder (for AH)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 8, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The morning will bring my joy
    Thirty-four winters
    Turn into my inner spring and summer
    My wonder
    My me

    The soul within my soul
    Reaching out
    For instruments
    Woodwinds
    Playing my song
    Writing my lyrics
    Joining my backround noises
    Preparing for my joy
    My wonder

    Oh my, oh my, oh my
    Yes
    My wonder
    Setting me more than free
    Moving me to the secret place
    The best of places
    Dreams be damned
    I'll be there
    Leaving tonight
    On the eve of my wonder

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    still

    vibin on your imagery, BE. You do it well.

    A
     
  3. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So calm, so peaceful, so so nice, lovin the flow...
     
  4. Destee

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    not only AH has been blessed by this peace

    thank you

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. belahni

    belahni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    agreeing

    wholeheartedly with Destee!

    B
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just came across this. The imagery was flawless here. Very delicate
     
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    On the wings of ease and wonder. This was so peaceful.
     
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