Black Poetry : On the 30th Dialing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Jul 20, 2005.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    your'e far away from me
    and you could be around the corner
    you're far away and
    you might be across the street
    the energy...energies pulling - pulling
    don't HELP
    cause
    you're far away and not a thought of connecting
    maybe
    I have to take a trip so i can touch,
    taste..
    closeness
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    maybe a peep from da window
    this was sweetly laid out to reach.
     
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    aight, this is something different, I am not use to things like this but I liked it.
     
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    This made me think of how someone could be in the same room, but you can still feel alone when they won't connect with you. I enjoy the way you usually bring a different approach to your pieces. Do flow on.
     
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    i loved this flow. much love to you.
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i appreciate you family...
    and welcome defiantson...
    browneyedgirly .. thank you..i was away for many months.. so i will check you out too
    and rich & watz..destee would not be destee without the positive energy you send to all of us..
     
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