Black Poetry : ON POINT

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ON POINT
    My rhymes hitting raw and when it comes to an unwritten law
    It’s terrible how do you erase it? Only embrace the legit raw
    This is thug ish and I love fish got a tuna thirst but what is
    The universe job and why is it here oh my it’s not clear a wiz
    Must figure this out it’s getting bigger no doubt gee it just
    May up and disappear in our face and be replaced by fuss
    So bizarre and inexplicable it may already happened, sweaty
    Rapping this stuff, look I’m at the crib concerned a medley
    Playing I must live and learn but at any rate plenty hate
    Exist and it’s hard to escape this, but it’s best to hesitate
    Rhyme to no conclusion and time is an illusion and really
    Online there’s confusion, but I just drink punch and wine
    During lunchtime and doubly so Champaign bubbly yo mind
    Going in circles like FRIENDS OF DISTINCTION no end to
    This dimension the episode plays because in those days men true
    To their belief and aware of a thief trying to steal that, from
    My face sweat drips and like spaceships my mind for some
    Reason hung in the sky while I sung a lullaby, it’s a lame day
    In much the same way that bad weather brings, walking away
    Wearing leather and bling, use the stamina of my camera lens
    To make a fast zoom but here in the classroom prestige will win
    Stats about rats worry teachers these furry creatures causes havoc
    Nice to be hype because life is like a dog it smells you out then
    Lick you like a bone then bury you after it carry you a grave end
    In the club it’s red wine but at work it’s them deadlines when
    They make a swooshing sound as they fly by winging the wind
     
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  2. Kadijah

    Kadijah Banned MEMBER

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    Amen to that! :thumbsup:

    P.S.
    Hope you sleep well cause in the daytime, your mind is on overload!

    Oh, and On Point. :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up.. tell it all bru....
     
  4. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow thanks for the props yall needed that
     
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