Black Poetry : On Point

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Jul 1, 2009.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On Point

    Write to the best of my ability and catch stress silly this
    Mess like a bowl of chilly hot to start the day my agility twist
    My feet but never piss in the street that’s nasty nothing phat
    And classy about that pure hate to eurinate on the pave at
    Public gatherings they be alarmed can’t weather the storm
    Look I’m dazed at night not ablazed with light ao never calm
    Can’t write in the dark ready to bite tree bark clever but alarmed
    Good preacher and like a hood teacher grade cats while I parade
    With stats hope yall done your homework I make domes perk afraid
    Like runaway coffee got a gun today back up off me it shoot bullets
    And throw bricks look I flow sick and throw ***** trigger happy pull it
    My gift is great and like boats it drift on lakes during verbal winds
    They stormy, got a drastic tall scheme like a basketball team bends
    The rules then school fools and slow pokes they can’t dribble rhymes
    They wanna do layups and act like stray duck quacked out of line
    Fear corrupt friction need clear cut ambition and special aptitude
    In order to rap rude and slap dudes my map never elude soulfood
    Rhymes Fail to make any impression on folks prevail with many
    Confessions in quotes, like dyes this rough stuff is absorbed a plenty
    By clothes got hot colors to stop brothers from acting up that my style
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On Point?
    hmmm, let's try another way of getting through to them
    cause maybe another way...will make some "listen"
    A 'Gun can only laid them so cold,
    as with all the other stories, ...untold!!
    Peace brother
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    on point indeed but often heard pointless to da streets ......stay on top of da game bruh !
     
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