Black Poetry : On & On

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  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unite Me at last
    The land I live gives Me long lost love
    Come to us from the forces of paradise
    Parallel Me the vestiges of our hearts
    Real life will continue to colour
    Our everlasting vessels through
    The flowing veins of beings
    with the rememberance of our everlasting
    Land
    Of
    Beauty
    That never will dismiss us as lost
    The heat is the forces that join the oppositions
    With the positions we now hold on to
    Never to dismiss me as a dismissal of home.

    Love I knew You where there.
    My heart surcomes your beat every day
    As I touch my feet
    And they heat with the forces that also make me cold.
    That is always the forces the energy in the air
    As I study ur eyes and they turn from light to dark
    Never opposing the open air
    Trees comfort me with leaves which seem to leave naturally
    Always swaying to the open fields.
    To gradually help me overstand fertalization.
    Truely is the untruth is as
    I Love the unity finally found between
    The dreamed sea's that I have crossed & lost to get to myundying eye
    And
    Seeing My Love one last time
    Befor We land
    I will keep You forever Love
    As I go & on throughout live w/ & w/out your sight
    Only to take my past sight which 4ever goes on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully written somehow this like a page from my life story