Black Poetry : On my way...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where you take me each time
    we talk or even the glance of
    a familiar scent that I can sense
    from so far away gives me the
    hope that there is happiness for
    me when and how I don’t truly know...
    I am in a bond that seems when
    I am half way out I fall down again.
    For the one who took my soul
    I hurt with pain but for the time
    we have talk I have regain
    something as almost at completetion
    as a soul mate you meet in a dream
    Not so long ago I thought I was
    in love but now I know it was
    to make me strong to deal with
    what have walk in my light which is you
    I write b/c it release alot of things I feel
    But with you make me say what I think
    say what I feel and not be ashamed
    of what you have released in me
    and for that
    I feel as if you could be my king
    I your queen
    More then this that meets the eye
    slowly and common
    I walk this ground not turning
    around but walk with eyes open
    Not running from fears but releasing
    temptation and holding on to
    a dream of maybe
    They say an old soul is a great
    one and calm protects and love
    Unconditionally wondering if that’s
    true of what i have..
    The strength of one built by two
    as we make love under the stars
    and the moon glazing heart racing
    and breath taken by each touch of passion
    Knowing your not here but feeling
    your touch drives me crazy
    Today I have no clue what happen
    not reached at the same time
    but the touch the imagination runs
    and flows over with wonder and sight
    Joyful tears of lost love and to new
    friendship of hoping to build stronger
    of something…
    I write because I wonder a
    woman of many talents and
    learning more of who she is as time
    moves on…
    The pain gave is the strength of
    me the hurt took is the thing that
    brought me to this road I must cross…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well felt scribe....ya pen running poet of the week!
    continue
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My $$RICH$$..thank you
     
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    feeling you deep
    on this flow poet
    very nice ...
    wonderful
    let it :rolling:
    Peace
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read Bluewater
     
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    am in a bond that seems when
    I am half way out I fall down again.

    very moving piece
     
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    :jawdrop:

    What can I say but dang.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage and gempis...thanks glad you like it