Quiet Poetry Lounge : On my mind

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by crimson caramel, Dec 29, 2004.

  1. crimson caramel

    crimson caramel Member MEMBER

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    Its raining
    I sit in the window sill and drink my coffee chilled
    There's an itching in my brain that I cant contain
    Because-your-on-my-mind
    Hating how I spend my energy
    my memory traps thee
    constantly holding thee
    Lock me up in love
    F***Sex Faces
    I want love paces in the night
    You know my past and understand my last,
    man standing, tragic ending,
    u giving me reasons to fall in love again.
    What is your Motive?
    Quote is your in love with her
    But made it known i could have you on the spur,
    of the moment,
    dont yet,
    Because if I'm so perfect, is your claim to fame,
    and that B**** cant get you aroused again and again
    then why the F*** are you with her,so you miss her, you dont say!!!
    Well, best friend of mine
    closer than close
    I should be crying but I cant let it flow
    Theres so little life in me left
    Never dreamt of revealing what was not profound
    feelings of oil mines locked underground
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What's on the mind, is always released...in one way or another. I like the way you dropped this piece, thanks for spilling, and ...
    welcome to the right spot ...keep spiling.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heavy drop meaningful
    nice to feel the flow poet welcome within
     
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