Black Poetry : On My Mind

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It seems as though
    you are always on my mind
    Everything lately reminds me
    of you. No matter what kind
    of flower I see, I think of
    how mentally and spiritually our love
    blossomed, saturated in sweet, floral
    bouquet, heaven's scent, from God above.
    You're on my mind, when I hear a
    smooth jazz vibe over the radio
    the mellow sax lulls me, the way
    your voice does when you flow.
    While reading a Shakespearean sonnet,
    the phrasing so potently romantic,
    reminds me of your tender scribes, weighing
    heavy on my mind, making me frantic.
    And those dreams.....
    You're on my mind even as I sleep
    our images embracing, enchanting
    each other souls, so deep.
    Not complaining, mind you
    for on my mind you will stay
    I wouldn't have it any other way.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a sweet release
    love the vibe of motion
    flowing here..............
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich for letting me know you're loving the vibe of this scribe.
     
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    Watz I love this piece...keep it flowin'in a nice motion
     
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    Sensualreality, I appreciate knowing that you loved the flow of this, thank you.
     
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    Sweet indeed, this flow. I've been there too, sister, and it's a cool place. :glasses: Peace and blessings to you.
     
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    As always, your poetry has such a way of massaging one's soul. :shades:
     
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    this was tight watz.....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, gempis, such a cool vibe to be in, thank you.
    Massaging your soul, Joyce? Quite a compliment to know my words do that, thank you.
    Thanks SwtT for the thumbs up.
     
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    I can't say I blame you, I wouldn't have it any other way myself...such sweet dreams, makes you wonder if they are in sync...
    there was a song long ago called "oh what a dream" ..I loved that song, your poem brings back "sweet" memories. thank for that.
     
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