Black Poetry : On My Knees

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by one_love, Apr 22, 2004.

  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    People selling illegal drugs
    G’s thinking they’re thugs
    That is the serious ****
    I’m not even trying to hear this a bit
    I just need to get over it
    Life’s always a quiz
    You want a biscuit? A cookie?
    I’ll give you a tissue
    No I’m not dissing you
    Cry me a river
    I’ve got the shivers
    Are you hearing me?
    This is the daily vision I see
    How can this be?
    Get down on your knees
    Click, baam!
    What now?
    You know what I found
    My eyes looking into eternity
    My body limp laying on the ground
    My soul screaming for humanity
    thump,~~~~~thuuump,~-~-~-~-~thuuuuuuuump-----------

    One_Love
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very interesting, i enjoyed it...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribing i was feeling every thumpppppppp!!
    nice write
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice dropp!!!!!!!
     
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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa :eeek: its a sad tale indeed scribe on poet
     
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    nice......................
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Woah can we say I'm lost.....that was the bomb!!! It blew up foreal with the thumps :bomb:
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    Thanks for the comments, it's been a while since i've written anything in the forum.
    One_Love
     
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