Black Poetry : On Love and Sex (repost feeling Maple-X)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jan 17, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love don't need sex for love to be
    Love stands by itself
    Complete and whole in its beauty
    Naturally
    That's why love don't love nobody

    Love ain't gonna be fooled
    Loved can't be tricked by sexual tricks
    It won't get caught in a lustful trap
    No, no
    Love is to smart for that

    Love be watching
    Laughing really
    As you pump and grind
    Have sex
    Doing your thing
    In love's sacred name
    Love wonders why you think it's all the same

    And when the sweat dries
    And the inner explosions are but a memory
    You hopelessly look for other things
    That make love what it is supposed to be

    You want that lasting feeling
    That comes from subtle things
    That comes when you care
    Without that
    All you did was phuk
    Love wasn't even there

    BE
     
  2. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my...

    ...goodess!!! I am completely
    and utterly blown away. The fact
    that my little piece could inspire
    something like this stirs incredible
    feelings; and I am reading this
    and realizing that it is coming from
    a man's p.o.v, and I'm loving it
    even more...:blush:
    :jumping:
     
  3. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are so right...

    and a lot of times, we don't realize we've confused the two until its too late! Been there, done that!

    This was great!:toast:
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey

    I know you know but ahhhhh have I told you lately that I love the way you do that thing with paper and pen?????



    One
     
  5. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poets. Thanks Zorb. Diggin yo stuff as well.

    BE
     
  6. Compassion

    Compassion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The way you do it- is special!
    Keep the love in your spirit and
    let it flow...

    Thank you-

    Its funny how your intention
    can find someone else's
    and make a way.

    Thank you with my head bowed.
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...I loved this in your face style, the truth is the truth, poetically flowed.
     
  8. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4real.

    Diggin' it.
     
  9. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving the intangibleness of it all, GREAT PIECE!
     
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