Black Haiku : On Hold...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Apr 16, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not going forward
    Nor sliding back, just on hold
    Indefinitely
     
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    suspended in time
    motionless, waiting, watching
    frustration sets in
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    no hold bar within
    can't see past the mazing yet
    vision i know of

    just trap between a
    hard rock and soft place thinking
    soon it will pass me
     
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    Won't advance a step
    Doing the one step forward
    Two steps back shuffle
     
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    The clock starts to tick
    As no doors start to open...
    I can't turn the knob
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    the blackness is cool
    allowing me to quiet
    ON HOLD..in stillness
     
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    there's no end in sight
    just darkness, eternal night
    I'm on hold, sadly
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waited til midnight
    On hold waiting for the clock
    to strike 12:01
     
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