Black Poetry : On A Love Cloud

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  1. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come walk with me hand in hand,
    Come hold me and be my man.
    Express yourself with words as only you can say,
    We then can be together forever plus a day.

    Whisper all the feelings that you’re too afraid to tell.
    Share your affections and on a love cloud we’ll sail.
    Through the Land of Unbelief and across the City of Good and Plenty,
    We sail on our love cloud,
    Memories, we make many.

    In all things accomplished we want success,
    So we give everything we have to receive the best.

    What if we don’t work out?
    What if we fail?
    What if never lived long enough to tell a tale.

    What if? lost its faith along the way.
    What if? never got to wonder…maybe… I hope… it could happen …one day.
    So don’t think what if?
    Because it may cause you to think about what could have been,
    And then you start asking yourself “ remember when?”

    So come sail with me on our love cloud as far as we can go,
    Our feelings will be just between us no one else has to know.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this one....
    reminds me of one of my poems
    thanks for sharing this one
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was sweetly laid out make me wanna say ummmmmm!!!
    take ya hand walk u through love lane show da sweetness
    it can be and set ya soul free love da vibe on dis
     
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    Sometimes we have to take a trip to the unknown. It's scary, but oh the benefits when it works out. I was feeling this poet.
     
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    ah yes..very dreamy
    I like how your words made me feel
    like i was on a cloud
    so peaceful...lovely...very lovely
    i really enjoyed your poem

    Peace
    Blue
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love can be so wonderful, when shared by two...take that ride to the clouds. I was feeling your vibes...
     
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    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Lovin it. Feelin this. Good flow. :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin this warm feeling flow ................
     
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    I see love got you on cloud9, huh. Do ya thang homegirl;) Beautiful piece
     
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