Black Poetry : ON A HUNTING SPREE IN THE WOODS

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  1. rhymebad

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    ON A HUNTING SPREE IN THE WOODS

    I’m in the fog misled with a dog bred to hunt he bark a lot
    The temperature start to drop a voice I hear but my plot
    Is to hope a horse appear so I can ride off, I’m on foot
    Getting a strong look at woods could be a bear with hair
    Out there somewhere, the fear is high no telling what bear
    Nearby could be a polar or grizzily I’m bolder with a Frisbee
    Atleast when I see a beast I can throw something hunting is risky
    Feel swell and amazed holding a twelve gage situation twisty
    Don’t laugh when you hear this I sincere pissed in my pants
    Had no brisk chance when I heard a wolf howl didn’t enhance
    My survival mode like snakes on a Plane they do lame biting
    Hunting wild game is exciting caught unprepared is frightening
    Between the wolf and bear I was ready to pop one with my shot gun
    Looked at my dog and said “this gun is mine these bones are yours son
    Must get home and do chores by the ton” shook about my destanys
    no book of recipes got can goods and my plan hood so yes I sees
    away out of this, strayed about wanting home never stayed out
    this long, got a truck as a thug but its stuck in the mud wanna shout
    for help, lonely no crew only a few hunter would take on a task this
    size may endup a nitwit in galore stress I need a bit more rest a list
    of thing to do including buying some bling too I’ll even shoot a silly
    wabit like Elmer Fudge and be happy to head home but my ability
    to hunt grows imminent, have the wisdom of a Socrates my system
    is hot with these tactics on survival since my arrival it’s a cataclysm
    fun come in caravans in bundles trying to become a Tarzan in this jungle
    it’ll be a thrilla to become a killa of a gorilla think of King Kong
     
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    Do tell, my brother.
     
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    flo on poet!:bellydance:
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really thank you all for the props on this one
     
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