Black Poetry : On A Gentle Friday Night

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Mar 17, 2012.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    relaxing with your love in my heart

    i watch the curtains slow dance

    with a breeze that slips

    from between my sheets

    burnt soul songs dripping from the ceiling fan

    push their smoky red lyrics

    inside me where pink should go

    the thought of holding you rubs

    against what is left of me

    all my pores open






    King Omari, all my love is yours
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow talking about feeling the depth of his love......
     
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    i love your scribes...keep flowing sister!
     
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    I do feel $$RICH$$. I truly do. Thank you.

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    Thank you so much, Sister Poet Gutta..., for the love and your encouraging words. They (you) mean a lot to me.
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    all i need is some music and some wine :11900:
     
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    warmth.
    thank you

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