Black Poetry : older woman

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    they say fermented wine is fine
    so would you like to dine with a younger man??
    you think i can't open your door
    take off you coat and pull your seat??
    that's the least of my feat

    betta ask stella
    i'm a hell of a fella
    here take my umbrella no longer shall it rain droplets of doubt
    as i take you out tonight

    you've not felt the stamina or energy i have the sprung remedy
    and no i'm not speaking viagra
    is that your old man's ad****tion
    i can make your waterfalls flow again Miss Niagra

    you pack experience thinking i lack experience
    saying to me your type vine is to rich for my kind and i wouldn't know where to drink
    please!!
    i can sip your wine with gin's mingle and not feel a tingle down my spine i can dig this inebriated intertwine

    so

    allow me to walk you to your house
    i've proved you wrong
    i can be everything to you but your spouse...


    peace.




     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    L:eeek::eeek:K atcha' !! :lol:

    Lovin' this flow j'hiah!! :)


    N2
     
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    JP.


    regardless of the fact that this is tyght-ly scribed...

    tell me who this old lady is who has been frontin' like
    she ain't really pushin' up on my lil baby brother!??
    if she's as old as mama... we g'on have problems! :lol:

    :heart:itsallLove.
    Elayne
     
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    N2urSoul,
    gotta let the older women know they can get sprung beyond
    repair :wink:

    GA_SunShyne,
    i've attracted a few older ladies, but this piece is only answering those who think we young men are immature, that's all.
    the dunn has other news for them.
    besides they could be one of mama's friends :jawdrop:
    (Pam Grier for instance :wink:)

    :lol: "old as mama" ... hell no
     
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    All older men
    Don't need Viagra
    Especially if we speak of
    The older brotha. :heart:

    For he has captivated
    The nuances of a tease.
    He knows the meaning of...slow :blush:
    And how to please.

    Unlike the rabbit
    He doesn't simply...
    Grab it. :jumping:

    While many babies spit up,
    At times too soon... :puke:
    Thru a double or more
    He (the older brotha) brings a woman
    To bloom.

    I'm married to
    A younger man.
    So I know what
    You're sayin'.

    But before I met James, :love:
    The older men I dated,
    Placed young men in shame.:eek:

    A younger man is great
    This I know. :D
    But I can't deny
    The wine of an
    Older brotha's flow.

    Many seek their pleasures
    In the realms of lust.
    But the sweetest climax
    Comes with commited trust.:love:

    So when it comes
    Down to it.
    It ain't about age.
    Cuz both can shake and rattle
    An older woman's cage. :hot: :D
     
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    smilin' atcha...

    coz i felt and did the same things as a kid...gave multiplicities of ecstasy to every woman who came my way...today, i say...do whatcha do, j'.

    loving this flow.

    and Joyce....hey, sistah Joyce...i see you can appreciate the mature thangs in life.:)

    continue your journey, my sistah.
     
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    slow you say??
    slow to me is only the start of
    this poetry in
    (e)motion

    like delicate raspberry lotion splash on your face
    i cover you
    inch by inch space by space
    exertion of six senses ending with taste :lips:

    i know the time and place plus the pace below or above your waist..
    i aim to please i aim to please you came with ease

    James doesn't have enough game to put this young one to shame
    :D


    i have the gift of math and science in alliance with my mental and physical strokes
    after the exam i may have a smoke :smokin:

    i wasn't implying decrepit jokes on older peeps unless their rabbits with your aforementioned
    two minute habits :puke:

    she'll be at the orgasmic peak waay before i grab it :wink:
    crying from mere pleasure


    Joyce
    i dig your flow a lot.
    i was
    expectin feedback like this one..
    this was inspired by older women who underestimated
    us "young bucks"..

    thanx for reading.
     
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    :lol:
    Like I said before and I'll say it again

    So when it comes
    Down to it.
    It ain't about age.
    Cuz both can shake and rattle
    An older woman's cage. :hot:

    It's not about game
    Or one's ability to brag.
    The combination of both
    Is too high of a price tag.

    It's all about the tenderness
    And compassion involved.
    The combination of both
    Is the essence in love. :love:
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller,
    as a kid you gave multiplicities of ecstasy??
    i do celibacy with ease
    this piece was to make a point of maturity
    i have one girl we begin with purity...

    thanx for the read

    Joyce,
    you're correct but this one centers on misconceptions, not the truth of which you've stated..

    thanx again..
     
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    j'hiah...celibacy is a good thing...especially today. coz AIDS scare scare me away from much. and, as so many of us claim to be able to satisfy many lovers...we can only satisfy one at a time. if it's the right one...that's the only one you need. PROPS.

    IT'S ALL GOOD, MY BRUTHA.
     
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