Black Poetry : Old School Ghetto Magic

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, May 1, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    inspired by mi corazon :heart: (funk-ta-fied)


    his song makes me much-
    much happy

    when i think of
    him all tha way down to his
    funk-nacious soul

    mo betta than tha
    sorry *** left-
    side
    fellaz who still fake
    tha flow

    ...i be feelin the real
    w/my fingers
    running thru
    his soft
    afro

    brotha brotha brotha
    know he
    know

    what's goin on

    and it’s sweet like
    that

    & i be lovin him

    str8
    sprung all up
    on
    my ghetto king

    when he comes
    around
    we give no
    less
    than
    everything

    he be so strong i
    stroke
    his hard
    on
    in my dreams

    funky old school
    essence
    70s ebony
    mellowed
    with time

    power/to/tha
    people kinda
    brotha
    mocha
    suave fine

    panther moves
    be all
    sexy as heyell
    to see

    & his
    brown eyes
    make
    love,
    reflect
    the black
    in me


    Alyce (c) 2002
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YEARS OF FUN UNDER DA SUN AND SWEET CARING FROM DA
    YESTERYEARS WIT PURE ESSENCE OF LOVE ......SPEAK ON A..
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce, gurl...i am truly lovin' tha way this piece flows. very nicely written, dear poetess. keep on scribin'...i'm still watchin'.


    ~~~jusletitflo~~~
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet Soul Expression!!

    I feelin it!! As always Alyce. Much Love Poet!!;)
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THREE SNAPS AND A BOOTY SLAP!

    GIRL.............
    See that's why I am in trouble right now..God Help me I love a
    smooth black man with that ole school flava!
    Go on and show all dem facets you diamond you!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  6. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I give up wit these too tight panties....It's time to super-size!!

    Grandmomma knows!!!
     
  7. ICON

    ICON Active Member MEMBER

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    Running fingers through Afros? i got one here waiting on some poetic fingers to pass by
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RIGHT ON! Sistah
    I can Diggit!
    A tyte piece of poetry.


    Scribeaboutit!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  9. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yes...yes...yes...
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as always you represent.
    wish i could've lived in the seventies when the club was tyte!!
    :D
     
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