Black Poetry : Old rhymes of mine

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Jahari Kavi, Dec 20, 2008.

  1. Jahari Kavi

    Jahari Kavi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rakim and Premo influenced me to write this one......

    My thoughts and images create potent sentences/
    that provide forms of energy like photosynthesis/
    My rolls significant you're just another sideshow/
    who's survival chance is like a man who walks a mine field blind fold/
    divine throne that I own I'll storm u like a cyclone/
    pick u up, then rip u up, then throw u off the skydome/
    My minds blown, when the mics on, I took and shook ya residence/
    spiritually blessin messages like the book of exodus/
    Perfectionist with excellence, intelligence, and sexiness/
    I'm guessin it's the catchiness that makes the hits consecutive/
    Executive that's wreckin it, whenever that the session hits/
    there's never been a lyricist that makes it seem so effortless/
    Becareful you're in danger, I speak so radical/
    Emcees I strangle, then proceed to catapult/
    Magical, fanatical, the scene we rockin it/
    And I'm never cocky just extremely confident/

    the following one is a lil graphic, but I edited it, lol....this is when I was sorta battle crazy about 5 years back....i was listening to too much Big L and Big Pun, lol....flow is kinda wack, but I was still learnin....

     
  2. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, this was HOT

    Why you been hidin' these mad skills fo?

    This was really tight....helps to see more of who you are....I like.
     
  3. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's obvious you're lyrically gifted....
    I'd loved to hear this scribe with the mic in ya hand!

    Well done poet!


    epiphany:heart:
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    the confidence is evident
    truth to the serum on why you should be president
    and if i failed to mention it
    even back den you was reppin' it

    :fyi:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya got mad skillz bruh tyme you display them more
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must agree with epiphany, this piece is just begging to be spoken on the mic.
     
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