Black Poetry : Old Faithful

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I stayed faithful
    to the end.
    Puppy dog
    or best
    friend?
    You be the judge.
    When it was all said and done,
    When their was no one to call on,
    When everything was bad,
    She called on me.
    I was there,
    My name was Faithful.
    The question that plagues me is
    If I did all of that,
    If everyone praises me for my
    kind heart and non-wavering disposition;
    then how come
    we aren't together?
    How come my love for her was never
    realized?
    Instead she ran into the arms of
    my brother and left
    good old Faithful in
    her dust.
    Still I stand there, hoping one day she'll
    come around.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne" Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome wow!!!
     
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    this was very nice posed so well
    my brother come to the top post
    in the poet of the week thread
    i been lookin for ya up there...
    hit it and show some love
    peace
    Angel
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for your love Angel. I sure will get up to the top post and leave a little something.
     
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    yes he/she may come...but it's always the case where the other half will then say...you came AROUND to late...and I'm sure ...you deserve better.
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmm I can totally dig that Queen. I do believe your right. All I can so is see what the Lord holds for me.
     
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    indeed what's for u is for u .......
     
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    This one hit the bullseye. Sometimes, though, we just have to move on since they have.
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your right Watz and I appreciate it great ly.
     
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    this was so moving...
    it's amazing how we all have that *one* person
    that can always come back...
    and to them...the rules never apply
    ....love is like that

    nice scribe...
     
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