Black Poetry : Old Dawg ~ New Trick

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Aug 15, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ego trippin' makes the rounds
    Hellhound,
    Sounding off too loud

    Panther pouncing
    Black and proud
    Proudfoot,
    Now I've tracked you down

    Baby boomer sonic (((boom)))
    Pack your toys up to your room
    Dime a dozen dawgs like you
    Need the switch ~
    They used to use

    Old Dawg,
    Got a brand new trick
    Bite your tonque
    And get with it

    We're so hip to king's english
    Word of mouth
    Don't gives us fits... :wave:

    Alexandre' great Dumas
    Wrote Camille Three Musketeers
    On the real that's why I'm here
    Pen in hand I'll take you there

    Poetry is who I am
    Drop of a hat
    Wry slight of hand
    X-ray vision of a superman
    Lifetimes over your lifespan


    Darryl Abdu Omari
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now dat was on fire !
    brutha 1poet indeed
    the poetic lyrical mazer
    tyte drop..................
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i am loving ya flow...
    i see your pen on a roll today..
    really enjoyed...Angel
     
  4. 1poetsought

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    Peace... and then some!
     
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    Letting the pen drip I see...Keep flowing.
     
  6. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dawg, I'm truly diggin this piece!
     
  7. Destee

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    it's been too long since i read you !!!

    very nice Brother 1PoetSought!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. nabraska

    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was taken in by the title and brought home by the piece....that was a supa-tight write...keep bringing the truth!! :yo: :yo: :wave:
     
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    :D Awesome...just plain Awesome...
     
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    the last stanza is particularly slammin, brothah. a TKO.
     
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