Black Poetry : ol skool fables

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ol, skool fables

    One jewel
    I hear silhouettes whisper
    From that I try to go
    Unplugged who’s corking me
    Life’s been torching me
    Scorching me
    Like my grinds divorcing me

    Of course I get it I’m losing my source
    My voice no longer has value, its hoarse
    Oliver twisting in a field, asking for forage
    Abandoned my spirituasl, feelings an orphanage
    For diseased soul, I’m a diseased soul
    No place to console, a spirit in which the mantle no longer holds
    Can’t even fathom
    How I fell prey to the phantom

    One mind
    If my soul and my mind was aligned
    This my destination, my solo transit
    **** it being a bandit, don’t even understand it
    So much promise, my limit was the comets
    A reflection of age and weary theory I pay homage
    Tired of what, falling down after running laps and hurdles
    Memory serves the stories of rabbits and turtles

    Of how turtles move slow, rabbits move quick
    Rabbits stray from teaching, silly with the tricks
    Moving from a new hole, my heart is a hole
    Lusting a child who has a erectile that’s whole
    Eradicated is was rabbits state
    Turtle moved slowly with splints, splinter, in his estate
    Hopping and skipping steps when I should have tucked my head in
    Look, look where I’m heading



    "Tainted Platinum"
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte u on a a wave from da heart ya pen say it all
    wow! u flowin u in here
     
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    this is soooo tight!
     
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    FANTASTIC!
     
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    You have a gift!!! Enjoyed this!
     
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    Hopping and skipping steps when I should have tucked my head in
    Look, look where I’m heading

    this was really cool!
     
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    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for responding
    these are trying times, know what im sayin
    i appreciate the love
     
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