Black Haiku : Oku Sequence

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Scry'be, Jun 19, 2007.

  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    expect me to conjure mid/
    nite in ur hips...we'll dance
    pagan rain
    our pores; whisper.

    II

    cold freaks we b, wrappin our
    thighs around the wind-taste
    sunlight with
    yo tongue's ripe tip;

    III

    i'd rather put u to my
    mouth-blow u-conch shell loud,
    and brash...hear me;
    hear my ocean.

    IV

    feel the slight sting of my bark
    housin' yo inner tree.
    we speak wa/
    tusi-We live!





    'House of Atreus' Publishing 2007
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me read you poetry
    Have you feast off my words
    Savoring
    Each yummy course

    II

    Cleanse your pallet with our wine
    Saturate your taste buds
    With the sweet
    Red burgundy

    III

    After the sun sets, reflect...
    Do the sun's rays linger?
    Or do moon
    beams shine brighter?

    IV

    Let's hum a ballad or two
    make footprints in the sand
    Let's count them
    all when we're through...​
     
  3. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if i hum notions of us...
    pre-existin' facts now said,
    let me blow
    wisdom and smiles.


    II

    we gon entertain time and
    kick up our heels, dancin-
    me-thinks free
    sounds good with u!


    haiku


    honey i kno u
    say u aint ready -lets leap
    out in faith and love!


     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'm lovin the display of Oku ........wow
     
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