Black Poetry : Ok let me give this poetry a try..."Scorpio Style"

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ScorpioStylez, Apr 30, 2004.

  1. ScorpioStylez

    ScorpioStylez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hope u all can feel this....

    Scorpio Style​


    I lay in my sands this is my domain so I patrol these lands
    Im the 5th deadly venom ScorpioStylez but im island falvored St Thomas child.

    Dem want no war wit Dis stinger and claws im a scorpio male laying down VA lover laws

    yes scorpio the sign of sexual pleasure
    allow my stinger to open your secret treasure
    feel my venom fill your body and you start to feel all hot
    This scorpio's stinger has just hit it's spot!

    See...

    Im DC breed
    jerk chicken feed
    Braded head
    Goya beans and Cococa Bread

    Im not a poet on any thread im just a lover of this poetry on Destee's bed
    Hello all im ScorpioStylez thanks nita mae for hooking me on my very 1st trial
    thanks sis triniti for our conversation time
    MBA im still feeling your vibe in your poetry line

    But as you all can see im no poet just a poetry lover
    I thank this family for welcoming this Scorpio Brother.
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Scorpio that was hot foreal feeling the flow big time
    :wink: :wave:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmm...Mr I claim not a poet:lol:
    this was tight..
    i am feelin ya drop
    flow some mo....
    Peace Angel
     
  4. ScorpioStylez

    ScorpioStylez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad u enjoyed it

    :thanks: all It's good to see people give love like this, but im no poet MBA it took me awhile to write this with some help from a friend. LOL
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    look within
    realease and flow
    no matter how long it takes
    you can find the poetry
    trust me my brother
    Peace
    Angel

    now come on flow some more :geek:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte sweet release flow on now !!
     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    new born poet.... welcome

    :toast: well in our eyes u are a poet brother scorpio this is family here.
    :birthday: to your poetic flow.... :toast:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome and flow some more, sounded good over here.
     
  9. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME MAN!!!!!!!!!
    KEEP THE FLOWS COMING!!!!!







    :jumping:
     
  10. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tite yo
    do anothaone

    one,
    /antar
     
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