Black Poetry : Oh you will...

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You`re soul will belong to the one who take`s you past that moment.
    The death of a past lover and the life of a new one.
    4 you have died today and were reborn in this orgasmic wave.

    caramelpython
     
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    i will bring you around to a love you lost and one you rememebr and having you search your soul.....reachin when nothing is there..for i am like no other..see its me and then its others who wish to be me....i will undress your wishes and make them reality...lol
    i always like this one glad ta see ya back....:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was awesome here the depth was deep
     
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    So....True...

    I know this moment all to well...
    I like to call them metaphysical..
    out of this world...
    love the way you brought this
    with such profundity
    and confidence...in a
    simplistic yet reflective scribe...

    lovin it...
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I will...

    Yes I will overtake this melancholy uncertainty
    bringing you a true love that is me...
    One that never dies but is reborn constantly
    ever perpetuating a lifelong fantasy...
    BJS
    Blessings On Your House :huh:
     
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    die today
    to be reborn
    in to that
    deep moment
    again and again
    Very nice indeed
    Peace
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes that moment is a special one indeed
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yws U will..... :flirt:
     
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    QQ..will what?
    what you trying ta say.. :spinstar:
     
  10. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah this was all right but let me drop this here

    Spend much time trying to touch a mind like cats clutch
    A nine, a criminal today in general way don’t know much
    About jail on life’s route failed now behind bars search
    For truth