Black Poetry : Oh Why I do Love You

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh why I do love you
    In the pitch black of, mi alma (my soul), mi corazon.
    Oh why I do love you, con carino (with love)
    You are my higher power
    You are my world

    Oh why I do love you
    With out hesitation
    With out delay

    Oh why I do love you
    Es la razon
    Porque
    My heart yearns and aches

    Oh why I do love you por la noche (in the night)
    On you I've reminiced
    Making all things right

    Como el fuego (like the fire)
    Burning intense, creating la luz
    Oh Why I do love you.

    Te quiero!
    Te quiero mucho!
    Te quiero!

    Oh Why I Do Love You
    When you call
    Contestare!,
    (I will answer you!)
    You pick me up when I fall.

    here's my soul
    with love
    in the night
    like a fire
    como la luz



    Desert Storm
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a beautiful song you have written about amour and the corazon!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was just lovely, and writing this partially en espanol, gave this scribe an additional romantic flair.
    Oh, and btw, I love your new avatar!
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, Sister Nevar- Thank you, for feeling my bilingual song. Hee,hee,hee....
    Hey, Sister Watzinaname- Thanks for the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed the romantic flair of this poem and thanks also for the compliment of my avatar.

    Much Love,
    Desert Storm
     
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