Black Poetry : Oh, No You Did Not Just Step to ME Like That

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Aug 19, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here u go with that "whats ur name?"
    "whats ur number?" type of game
    flashing the bling
    pretendin to talk on ur cell
    when i never heard it ring
    bragging about ur credentials
    tellin me how u got tha potential
    to wine n dine me
    but ur car is probably a rental
    tellin me how sexy i look
    how most men are probably shook
    cuz im intimidating
    but "one real man is all it took"
    ur smiling and thinkin ur gamin me
    but I knew ur plan as soon as u came to me
    u wanna get inside my panties
    I'm thinkin "all men are the same to me"
    I wont lie, ur hansom and ur pockets are fat
    But money isnt the key to my kat
    I need to hear more from ur heart instead of these lines ur tryna rap
    i know ur boys and them
    treat women like toys and when
    they get what they want they leave to find another women to POY-ZEN
    but u need to stop for a minute and look in my eyes
    see where im comin from n then you'll recognize
    i'm not a *** nor do act like one
    im more like a queen, something like a prize
    yea i'll admit that ur out appearence is pretty impressive
    but when it comes to my heart, im very selective
    so if ur bold enough to step to me
    be bold enough to respect it
    u gotta learn to be not just my man, but my friend
    and if ur a true playa be that, dont do it cuz its a trend
    so why dont we do this...
    go back over there and lets try this again.


































    ;) ;)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW! You dropped it with this one right here gurl! I knew already by the title..:)
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol thanks girl...
     
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    Mmmmm :) lol this was off the chain for real :) tell it like it is :)
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks triniti424...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 off da hook u pose'd a wall banger !
    tyte scribe poet .
     
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    COME CORRECT

    Flabbergasting! :heart:
     
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    this is tyte :)
     
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    so why dont we do this...
    go back over there and lets try this again.

    lol, love this ending...
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol thanks yall, glad u enjoyed it...
     
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