Black Poetry : Oh Momma

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happy Birthday Momma
    Thinking of you…God took you home
    To the Promise land 12-11-1991
    Knowing you’re in a better place
    Brings my mental to peace

    Well this year, I grew into that woman
    You so much dreamed of…
    Walking with my God
    As you sit at his throne
    It still gets hard at times
    Wishing you was here with me
    My heart is empty but my love grows
    For our father…

    Oh momma
    Like the dew in the morning
    I feel your presence
    Pouring in my soul
    Resting on my heart
    As my spirit walks in faith


    I have dreamed many of nights
    You walking from heaven
    Just to be with me…holding me
    As I go through life’s daily struggle
    Oh momma
    My mind drifting…far away

    As I look towards the sky
    The clouds began to open up
    And there you stand
    Drape in white with wings
    Spreaded…
    As a tear ran down my face
    I felt your touch….
    ….wipe the tear away
    and your smile beaming
    Oh momma
    How I miss you

    I can hear you softly speaking
    In the morning breeze saying
    To keep on praying that you have
    Never left my side…
    Saying child I am fine
    Just keep doing what you doing
    Life only brings you
    What you make out of it
    You’re a strong woman
    I know because I raised you
    Keep your head up…
    And baby girl don’t give up
    Oh momma
    How I miss you
    Happy birthday

    Wishing I can bring you home
    But you are already home
    Oh momma

    Everywhere I am….
    She is with me
    In memory

    (c) 2005
    Newvision NewDay
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My child, you are never, ever alone
    for I still sit here high upon my throne

    I see every single move that you make...
    it's I, who correct all your mistakes

    I'm the Sun that warms your glowing face
    it's me, who help you run this race

    I watched, as you gave ..your Heart to a man
    it was me, that helped you, take that stand

    Every morning you rise, brings a smile to my heart
    and I say to my God...give my child a new start

    To raise her children, just as I raised mines
    and a better daughter, I would never fine

    My child, keep your feet on solid ground....
    cause Momma will always be around

    And this I promise, with all my heart...
    child, you and I ...will never part
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was outstanding and very dearing took me back to that moment of tyme
    and the love i know my mom has for me as she watch ova me daily in guiding
    my path ...........i feel her now
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Even though we know our moms have unconditional love for us, there are those times that we just know we've done something that would especially warm their hearts. You wrote a very good description of one of those times. Endearing flow.
     
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    Man, I'm gonna cry!!!
    This was so beautiful
    Makes me feel blessed
    that I still have my momma.
    I loved this.
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes the spirit of momma is stiil here
    and i know you would make her proud

    just writing this shows a great deal of understanding

    but from what i can telll momma did a great job

    DSS
     
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