Poetry Critiques : oh lord.....

nevar

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I'm a Georgia Peach!!!!
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working to own my plus size empire.....
oh lord i come before you cause thy enemies are at me feet
i ask you to give me the strength to not fight but retreat

restrain for taking one life in my own hands
i must abide and obey your every commands

my fellow brothers/sisters seem to not get what i'm saying
leaving me to decay

upon the very soil that all was made from
lord i thankyou for the gift you given me
to guard against any harm

oh lord i stand before you with a solemn heart
i look to you for guidance and not man's chart

you taught me to love our neighbor our brother
but to embrace the ones who gives life which is my father/mother

i suffer so that i feel i cant go on
but somehow you appear to me to hold on and be strong

they didn't understand my son when he was on earth
they persercuted him even throwed dirt

at my only begotten son who purpose was to lay down his life for all
mankind
everything happen for a reason you'll see the true light in due time

you must be steadfast, dilligent for my child i'm with you
to get through the darkness, evil will be at you

you must put on the armor that i'm providing
dont let the devil get you or he will continue to riding

upon everything that you believe in
have you lusting for worldly things have you thinking he's your friend

i tell you the devils a lie
will leave you in a puddle of turmoil and a river of cries

dont worry in due time people will see the light you carry
some will be for you, against you its vary

listen child remember that i'm always here
and i'm in your heart so keep me near

when the world seems to get you down
with me your heavenly father i'll always be around

and look one day i will make all things new
and you would peer out to see all things are not blue

and you would stand hopefully among the righteous and the unrighteous
and i would judge all and each one if the want to show repentence

for all the sins that were commited during your lifetime
even if you stole, rob, kill or even committed a crime

child cheer up through me only will you gain salvation
all your ememies that are before you will end up damnation

hold you head up now child for the angel of hope is at your becokning call
to help you on your way and to pick you up from the fall

and i say thank you lord for blessing, adressing me with your love
i will continue to call on you and look for you above

and i rose like a phoenix
now that i got the meaning

that my saviour, my lord, my heavenly father will always be around
when i feel dispair..............
oh lord
 

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