Black Poetry : ...OH LORD!!...THIS PAIN...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i haven't been on here cuz i've been more sick than ever....but i'm better now...i missed ya'll...


    oh oh Lord! this pain never ceases to fade away!

    and i awake rejoicing Him to see just one more day


    but there are days when i wish i was underground...

    so this pain wouldn't sting so badly on this ground


    Lord! take me away from here to a celestial place

    i'd be grateful for you to come and shed you amazing grace


    to open my heart and mind and soul to keep you near me

    your the one who keeps my lungs steadily breathing, see...


    as i've said before i'd willingly surrender my existence to you

    all the way until your Godly will says that i am through


    doin' your will around and to the ones you asked me to

    i only pray that their deliverance is enough to get them to


    the place i wanna escape to so bad that at times it hurts

    i want to be in you embrace in heaven where pain don't lurk...


    oh Lord! i've carefully lived my life since this cancer struck me

    and everytime i think theirs a brighter day dullness inflicts me


    see i don't understand why some can live their life with no strife

    seems like i'm the one taking their trials into my own pained life


    oh Lord! this strain is more than enough to start and pry me down

    the only thing keeping me highly stable is heaven's crown...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my dear sister :grouphug: many blessing to you
    Peace
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks bluewater...
     
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    feeling ya sistah may da blessing & healing comfort u
    happy to see u back
     
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    glad to see your back...
    many blessing my sister...:grouphug:
     
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    Welcome back sister!

    Sorry to hear you were ill, I'm sending prayers for healing up for you!

    Keep flowing, this piece was beautiful
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody...its good to be back....i won't be here for long...but its nice to be here for now...
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the encouragement girl:)
     
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