Black Poetry : oh...how i breathe you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Mar 25, 2003.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    with you near i feel...like love personified



    i feel like--
    children in a toy store when momma says
    get what you want hunny...

    i feel like
    obfuscation that
    finally makes sense when we touch--

    i feel like--
    falling thru the clouds
    using theses enjambed lines as a c l i f f...

    loving each ellipses--
    leaving we in suspenses
    when we kiss it's
    tremendous--ly

    sending me
    to ecstasy
    resting re--plete in the
    thought of
    the next time eyes* see

    the beauty of your soul--
    the intelligence of your heart--
    the logic of your spirit--

    it
    helps
    I
    "get
    by..."
    best expressed by Talib--

    less distressed is the "kid"--
    or man rather
    when she is..
    present
    her
    presence
    is
    a
    present--
    i'd die to open
    every time.



    oh...how i breathe you.




    sean.revisited

    (from untitled;as is life, the flows.)
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man dis love u pose is awesome
    she feels u and knoweth of ya
    warmth
    u expressed it well .....................keep dis ink drippin'
    coz love has no end
     
  3. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmm, seems like someone got the hots for somebody...Hope she knows.
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH and Dream Weaver... thank you both for the love. I really appreciate it.

    sean.aprreciated
     
  5. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEY NOW

    as always sean....your work
    m
    o
    v
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    s
    me inexplicably......

    nice work suga.....

    **falling in love**
    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
  6. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    s u? glad to hear such a thing from such a prolific writer

    in their own right!

    thanks for the reply. it is appreciated.

    sean.bowing.
     
  7. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifully written.
     
  8. Moses the Poet

    Moses the Poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really dig it when good poets have fun with words.
    This was a worthy read. Lighthearted, easy on the eyes, visual and romantic.

    Thumbs up!

    Andrew
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sean!!! sweetie, this piece is beautiful. and your wordplay is just lovely as ever. i always love that comin' from you...but you know that.?.
     
  10. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the replies...
    one of your fans

    sean.revisted
     
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