Quiet Poetry Lounge : Oh Dear...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Feb 8, 2008.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes all the whys
    are not known
    Those particular reasons
    you have grown
    in between my pauses...
    And frankly, I don't need to know
    the causes
    as to how I can feel
    your imprint on my skin
    Does my upper thigh end in the same spot
    that your index finger tends to begin
    Do your lips taste even sweeter
    than when I suckled them last?
    Just when I think
    it's all in the past
    It isn't
    There you are again
    Making me tingle
    from head to toes
    Oh dear...you'll have to excuse me
    I guess I'm having another one of those...
    You know...moments
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Oh my !!!
    those moments sound like fun if i was watching whewwwww!!!
    got me bout to have one too.
     
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    phynxofkemet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is tight!

    Sis Watz, i really like this - it's poignant and bold. Encore! :wink:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Were you peeking Rich? Go on and have a moment too, lol. Thank you.
    Well glad you liked this piece phynxofkmt, thank you kindly sis.
     
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    I know how those moments feel...
    Great job explaining it...
    Beautiful piece!
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, that's how those moments can be sometimes tashatoya, thank you, and so "nice" to see you again.
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hee,hee,

    "I guess I'm having another one of those...."

    Ha ha ha... that was good. Feeling this.

    Flow on.

    Desert Storm
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Desert Storm, lol, I appreciate your kind response.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece had me smiling so much...
    It's a good feeling to be "In the moment" moments.
    whew, ...don't we sometimes wish those moments lose time ...some of my "moments" ...have out last some of my "hours"
    Nice piece poet.
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So, you get lost in those "moments" too, queent? They don't last long enough, glad this made ya smile, thank you much.
     
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