Black Poetry : oh dear God

[Destee]

oh dear God
i need more strength
courage and sustenance
Lord if you will
allow her please
join me tonight
in my dreams

oh dear God
i know you know
the depths of which
my sorrow flows
Lord if you will
hear my prayer
ease my broken heart's despair

oh dear God
i miss her so
how much longer
can i go
without her love
please intervene
give her to me in a dream

oh dear God
let her hold me
as she wipes
my tear stained eyes
let her say
just one more time
it will be okay
dear child of mine

 

[alyce]

Destee

my heart is still racing as I sit here, feeling every line of this poem...this plea to the Lord. You have captured, in these verses, the void, the anguish, the unspeakable pain of a daughter longing for one more touch/feel of her departed mother. I am moved by your words.

You have touched tender places in me today. Thank you for sharing.

Peace

a

 

[DeJay]

Destee

That was captivating and sweet thoughs like that God will let come to pass. But other than that, that was tight! :spin: :rolling:

 

[$$RICH$$]

DESTEE

TRUELY HE HEAR YO CRIES
I LOVE THIS OPEN PRAYER
TO THE MASTER 4 HELP//GUIDING
MY HEART RACE FAST AS I READ
MY MIND KNOWS HE WILL ANSWER
AND MY SOUL FEEL WHAT U FEEL
WELL TOLD MY QUEEN

 

[blakverb]

Wow destee,
this is beautiful...

blak